thomas
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @williamcarson, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'thomas'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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