l try my best 😔
Mario Salinas7 Plays
•31 Mar 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yo @mariosalinas.7013620! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'l try my best 😔'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
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