l try my best ๐
Mario SalinasLife is hard, Hope I make it, Itโs a risk, But Iโll take it, Feeling like Iโm living Stuck in the basement, Iโm just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But Iโll make it, I canโt wait a long time Iโm anxious, Iโve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yo @mariosalinas.7013620! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'l try my best ๐'! ๐ฅ Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! ๐ง Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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