Father Figure

BAMBOOZLED (13:48)

Father Figure
BAMBOOZLED (13:48)

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31 Mar 2022

slow and dumb, i grew up, too fast no fun and when i tote the gun you better hope that im not in a weird mindstate, or the night before studying colombine, i know im feeling fine, but somethings itching my. insane nerves onside and ive been itchin and imscratchin now, keep fucking rhyming while necks tied up hanging like a pendulum you motherfuckers, slow and dumb, i cant stand these re-aruns, and if you keep doin it youre gonna bleed at once(youre gonna bleed at once) deep down its what you want, deep down its what you waaaaant

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3 years ago

Hi @fatherfigure! Welcome to our feedback of 'BAMBOOZLED (13:48)'! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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