OOCHIE COOCHIE
Kobe Johnson9 Plays
•30 Mar 2022
Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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Hi there @kobejohnson.7010235, Here's some feedback on your track 'OOCHIE COOCHIE ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Nice improvisation with the lyrics, soundin real good. 🧠 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠 Good choice of beat! 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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