off day
13 Plays
•30 Mar 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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well done! peep my latest battle and drop an honest vote if you have time fam 🙏 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @christianbalderston, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'off day'! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
keep working at it! Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
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