💅🏾💖Sexy Diva💖💅🏾

2 years ago

ok I see you ☺️

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @mane2008, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Dreaming bout da paper '! 💥 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Your bars are on the beat every time! You just don't miss! It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! Good job with the audio quality, this sound clean. ✔ This one has that perfect blend of soulful and banger. The beat with that pitched soulful sample packs a ton of emotion and atmosphere, those rolling 808s are deep and powerful and the flows on this are immaculate for real. Really well constructed track, unfortunately the audio quality isn't the cleanest and the vocals are a little low at times, but the fundamentals of this track are amazing. It's just about the details now. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Alfred Chisokela

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥