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nice freestyle my G ๐ช๐ฝ๐ช๐ฝ๐ช๐ฝ tap into my newest song #4TB
What's up @juniorwilliamsholmes, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'playing around'! ๐ฅ Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ The rhyming is well put together. โจ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! ๐ The beat is dope and really works for this track. ๐ผ See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Awesome recording, the video looks great. ๐ฅ Keep using backgrounds like that, it really helps your video stand out. ๐ Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
thank u
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