What's up @juniorwilliamsholmes,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'playing around'! 💥
Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! 🌠
The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
Awesome recording, the video looks great. 🎥 Keep using backgrounds like that, it really helps your video stand out. 🌇
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The Rap Fame Team 😎
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What's up @juniorwilliamsholmes, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'playing around'! 💥 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! 🌠 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Awesome recording, the video looks great. 🎥 Keep using backgrounds like that, it really helps your video stand out. 🌇 Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
nice work fam fureal this is fire 🔥🔥🔥check out my page releasing part of legendary freestyle album series 2 first to reply will be part of the album Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯