Good news on hes hit
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•29 Mar 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hey @morismark, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Good news on hes hit'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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