my life
Joshua Ritter17 Plays
•28 Mar 2022
, boo, no frontin' Even when the skies were gray You would rub me on my back and say baby it'll be okay Now that's too a brother like me, baby Never ever give my p*ssy away even keep it tight, aight? And I'ma walk these dogs so we can live In a fat ass crib with kids Word life, you don't need a ring to be my wife Just be there for me I'm gon' make sure we Be livin' in the fucking lap of galaxy I'm realizing you didn't have to f*ck with me But ya did, now I'm going live my life
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