Life is Hard (15:17)
Joshua Ritter9 Plays
•28 Mar 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hey @joshuaritter, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Life is Hard (15:17)'! 💥 Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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