Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Wassup @sabrinaardoin, Thank you for sharing 'take1🤡' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Sabrina Ardoin

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.