dad we miss you
Ronnie RamsdaleLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hey @ronnieramsdale, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'dad we miss you '! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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