Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @2fiz0cvlbk, Here's some feedback on your track 'Wit da aim pain ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. We recommend checking out our Masterclasses. They're a really helpful way to learn tip to improve your skills! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dane Humphrey

3 years ago

Bang bang yuh bang bang yuh. Bang bang dem bullets rain walk-in down da stair and it ain’t da same yuh dad be drowndin da frame he ain’t go no fame all he got is shame on his name yuh I got aim he ain’t da same I overcame all his shame he ain’t in da frame cause he got a lotta shame he became the main pain yuh he gotta a lotta shame on his name me wit da aim gonna hit em in da mane I ain’t gonna feel no pain he just like a shit stain got to many chains and some big brains yuh hit em wit da planes yuh he needa get in his lane yuh deal wit all his pain he ain’t gonna gain any sane while he’s in pain yuh yuh. He’s put so many people in pain it fucks up their brain they will never be tha same he thinks it’s a game it ain’t no game it ain’t finna get you fame you got all that shame ima claim that you can’t do da same you ain’t gonna get fame exspecially wit dat aim yuh yuh yuh I had overcome the pain that you thought was a game yuh yuh bang bang it’s not a game.