life is hard!
J DoeLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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What's up @jdoe.6993592, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'life is hard!'! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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