Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @hamorakirikiri, Here's some feedback on your track 'Astro vision ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Hamora Kirikiri

3 years ago

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