lame

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24 Mar 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Hey @salvadorgarcia.2345, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'lame'! 💥 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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