Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @kritical.k, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'OTW'! 💥 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

kritical

2 years ago

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