Hi there @dlyan,
Here's some feedback on your track 'BENZ (Extended)', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ
Strong bars on this, keep it up! ๐ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ
The recording quality is good, nicely done! โ
You have an amazing voice fam! Would tighten up the mix just a lil bit but the hook is crazy. Def work on balancing the vocals a bit and you'll be A1! Keep workin!
Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
AMAZING ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅsuper glad to hear this ๐ฅ๐ค I just released 4 new tracks for my new album keep in touch
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Yo, I am fr about this, you got a serious future ahead of you ๐ I love your delivery, especially the bars you got in store for the listener, and itโs FYE๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฅ Also, I love the vibe the song gives off, and I love it. keep doing your thing, and youโll be golden. and also, practice!! practice makes perfect!! ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ถ๐ถ Myself I am 15 years old, so can you give me honest feedback as well? that would be amazing, and I was wondering if you wanna work on a song together as well?! if you do hmu! but support me as well! ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Perfect ๐ฏ Perfect ๐ฏFire track๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅHard work & Dedication โ๐พ โ๐พKeep grinding โ๐พ๐ซกGrace & Peace ๐๐พ ๐๐พRespect ๐ค๐พ๐ค๐พ๐ฏ๐ซก Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Hi there @dlyan, Here's some feedback on your track 'BENZ (Extended)', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ Strong bars on this, keep it up! ๐ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ The recording quality is good, nicely done! โ You have an amazing voice fam! Would tighten up the mix just a lil bit but the hook is crazy. Def work on balancing the vocals a bit and you'll be A1! Keep workin! Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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AMAZING ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅsuper glad to hear this ๐ฅ๐ค I just released 4 new tracks for my new album keep in touch Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Yo, I am fr about this, you got a serious future ahead of you ๐ I love your delivery, especially the bars you got in store for the listener, and itโs FYE๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฅ Also, I love the vibe the song gives off, and I love it. keep doing your thing, and youโll be golden. and also, practice!! practice makes perfect!! ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ถ๐ถ Myself I am 15 years old, so can you give me honest feedback as well? that would be amazing, and I was wondering if you wanna work on a song together as well?! if you do hmu! but support me as well! ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ