Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @mr_t_fingers.2971, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'FUCKED UP SOCIETY '! 💥 The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

MR_T_FINGERS

3 years ago

Yea i got voices in my head telling me not to lose control But I built walls so high So that I never let go but it's this pain that's making me weak every since you left me but it's not what I should morn if I just can't breathe cause I'm down on my knees cause I believe praying to God to please save me cause I'm on the edge not knowing where to begin keep pushing forward or pull this trigger to the end yea I know I built my dynasty in this fucked up society but you mother fuckers keep invading my privacy in varieties keep coming and going without even saying hi to me acting like I'm normal with this depression an anxiety so keep lying to me like this heart wasn't torn yea I'm MR_T_FINGERS yea that's how I was born yea 3 heart surgeries but I'm still standing like mercury but you wanna paint me like the enemy in the infirmary can't help that God gifted me life for entirety but I don't take it for granted like the majority when I'm my own enemy but I stand my ground with authority for the all right reasons while everyone's losing there lives in this fucked up society and treason hope the world can can get better by seasons cause I'm MR_T_FINGERS and this song ends while I'm leaving