Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Wassup @jayvon.6977139, Thank you for sharing 'cold night' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Your vocals are real quiet compared to the beat, put 'em way up to get a perfect mix. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

jayvon

2 years ago

life is hard but I'll make it try to see if I can take it walking down path niggas say I won't make making this is money can't stop to I am I'm them millions got this gun on my hip letting These shot out so fast let a nigga fall down to the grass get in my car and i am hiting the gas Police Behind me I am hiting the gas can't go to jail they on my ass