Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @alphamza, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'the shogun's style'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 We can't hear you too well on this, try turning up your vocals a bit in the mix next time! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Wolf gang

3 years ago

alpha mza : battle of the shogun u be like a low gun my style be like dr suess cuz i be rappin rhymes while you standing over there looking like a stupid moose yo u lost a tooth cuz u be in many bar fights at your local booth uh when u all be high yall just be staring at the roof uh u be on the street cuz u be making nuting but a stupid beat. yo u cant rap fo nuthing cuz u be acting like u sick but when u see dick u just lik yo i want a lick cuz u a bitch ay and your women is a fucking witch on the street yeah pulling out gats for fun yeah my pack be rapping rhymes till the end of the sun after we hit u will be torturing u wit our gats our style just like rabid bats yeah rap be gay nowadays and my pack just be like yo just stay the fuck away.