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Catch me #23Kingsproductions

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Catch me catch me when i fall hold me when die wipe away my tears give me back my years future is unclear the devil i will not fear hit him with the spear of life wipeoff your knife told once told you twice we anit playing dice i love it when smile.back at me it could part seas fly free with the honey bees be all you can be see all you can see fly free with the honey bees part seas be all you can be i got plans for you hope you understand you always been in my plans me and you we cool as fans catch me when i fall hold me when die wipe away my tears give me back my years future is unclear the devil i will not fear hit him with the spear of life wipeoff your knife told once told you twice we anit playing dice i love it when smile.back at me it could part seas fly free with the honey bees be all you can be see all you can see fly free with the honey bees part seas be all you can be i got plans for you hope you understand you always been in my plans me and you we cool as fans

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thañks

2 years ago

Wassup @trenton23rdking.247, Thank you for sharing 'Catch me ' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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