Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @spacestrips, Here's some feedback on your track 'she only want me ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Try spend more time on your lyrics to showcase your skills. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

$hady$$

2 years ago

yeah yeah yeah listen drop the beat hop in the choppa pull up with a nine danm got a say your girl fine now she mine listen she only want me because I can please her right she want someone that can bend down on there knee and can afford a 200 million dollar ring don't be salty I am the king you are the little queen don't be scared to watch me make your girl scream bitch pull up the only thing that your gonna hear is cock cock cock try me again and you'll see the end tired of hearing your shit time to die pow pow pow now I will be at your funeral watch your family crying and being miserable