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sometimes i feel like dying sometimes i feel like flying bout blast off in my space ship been hell of trip somikng on a zip one wing in the fire i got what they desire this my empior sometimes i feel like crying devil been lying tic tok been flip floping Breaking ties spreading lies Crossing bridges dotting eyes I'm sorry for the things I do Jesus has remade me now he over pays me with his love Holy spirit Satan's fears it hoping around i anit buying time to start flying trying bout blast off Hope I don't crash hope it last Forgive me for my past it was a blast And fast Sometimes I feel like dying sometimes I feel like flying Bout to blast off In my new space ship Been hell of trip Smoking on zip One wing in the fire I got what they desire This is my empower Sometimes I feel like crying Devil always spying I anit lying Time to start flying Trying Bout blast off Hope I don't crash hope it last Fuck the past bout blast Crunch time I'm the captain What just happen

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2 years ago

Hey @trenton23rdking.247, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Blast', here are our thoughts 💥 A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best. Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

sometimes i feel like dying sometimes i feel like flying bout blast off in my space ship been hell of trip somikng on a zip one wing in the fire i got what they desire this my empior sometimes i feel like crying devil been lying tic tok been flip floping Breaking ties spreading lies Crossing bridges dotting eyes I'm sorry for the things I do Jesus has remade me now he over pays me with his love Holy spirit Satan's fears it hoping around i anit buying time to start flying trying bout blast off Hope I don't crash hope it last Forgive me for my past it was a blast And fast Sometimes I feel like dying sometimes I feel like flying Bout to blast off In my new space ship Been hell of trip Smoking on zip One wing in the fire I got what they desire This is my empower Sometimes I feel like crying Devil always spying I anit lying Time to start flying Trying Bout blast off Hope I don't crash hope it last Fuck the past bout blast Crunch time I'm the captain What just happen

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