life is hard
Jackson BonomoLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hey @jacksonbonomo, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'life is hard'! 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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