Sir Red

(WIP)

Sir Red
(WIP)

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17 Mar 2022

This rap game is boring no real pieces left to play Went from 3D chess to 2D checkers, lame More plots to own bigger plots, Lucky if we live our lives Walking on the ice carefully Watching it break beneath me Surrounded by lines, that cause shattering createing greater gore blood stains splattering Evil inside of my head I’m trying to ignore It’s feeble to go to bed when the demons want more Yeah yeah When the demons want more I hit the stage, my anxiety spikes To many bright lights I can’t back down tho because the soul is in love with the hype Plus one day I wanna be in the movies So I’m trynna do battle raps To get a few groupies petite tomboy shorty Yeah) She just my type I like a woman that can man up I don’t need no damsel in distress She don’t attract me with the dress Heart beating in my chest Cutie in them jeans say less I need one that be aceing any test When Baby go crazy baby must need some rest I Wake up on them worst days You still say I’m the best I got a royal mind so forgive me if I spoil See her in the morning covered in the sweat an the oil Fixing cars like a mechanic She the chill pill when a brother stress and panic Quick to bring me back to earth Too cold too hot I’ve hated this planet since the disappearance of Tupac, Eazy-E, Mac-Dre, nowadays I don’t even listen to what a critic has to say This rap game is boring no real pieces left to play Went from 3D chess to 2D checkers More plots to own bigger plots still they check ya The disrespect dawg When villains win The hole in your soul, You know this a rigged competition Are you incompetent Incapable of getting the hint What was your mission Why is it when reall people talk You never listen Choose sides but do sides matter There’s always one entity up the ladder Puppeteering multiple silhouettes Shadows dancing on the walls Nobody in the building not a body Lost spirts? Or possibly a zombie Been brain dead Since a young age Read thru your bible page for page Didn’t seem to make the rage go away Drank the blood ate the flesh Just a nice, sacrifice Are they men or mice A better future Is what I’m hoping for All these busters disappear Windex on rap, let ‘em see clear For murderous obscene actions I don’t cheer Switching gears wiping tears, moving tiers When pen touches paper it’s so sincere Greatest weapon against your fear Besta spin that web from peer to peer Network, fall down let that net work What’s your net worth Spend money you create gaps Next fall might just be a trap No safety, hard hit aw shit just lost my annex Hear me on the radio and they like an next Ha ha ha the disrespect It’s bound to make you stronger Cause after you breath when the bullet penetrates The blood curdles and than Coagulates Body fall down quick You shake Aw shit Someone get the car Homie down he seeing the stars in his head He don’t say a word, who to be trusted they want him dead Busted out windows they want his bread

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2 years ago

Hey @sir_red, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '(WIP) '! 💥 You got great bars here. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. 👍 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Yo the cover art def goes hard fammo! Perfect for the track! You def wanna keep it up and stay grinding! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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