Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @oglilbigman, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'let me get this paper '! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

OG Lil'Big Man

3 years ago

#younggravy#kickthegamegone#dopegameLame#zachswack, YouTube