startoff
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•17 Mar 2022
holl up- hang on -wait a minute- let me breath a second step back rewind myself really can't thank of nothin else to keep goin in the right direction everytime i start to believe mothfuck wanna pull up hell naw put them on they Knees 12 Gauge infared beam on they fohead say stupid talk a get ya body chalked get crumbled up like steal bread ain't trippin dogg what ya talkin bout best believe you should have watched your mouth now you came up missin thats a good thang heard you was snitchin i' m in the kitchen i' m whippin thangs you changin up thats a damn same
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Hey @jayrod420, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'startoff'! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. We like the bars, well written! Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! The track has meaning. 👍 Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
holl up- hang on -wait a minute- let me breath a second step back rewind myself really can't thank of nothin else to keep goin in the right direction everytime i start to believe mothfuck wanna pull up hell naw put them on they Knees 12 Gauge infared beam on they fohead say stupid talk a get ya body chalked get crumbled up like steal bread ain't trippin dogg what ya talkin bout best believe you should have watched your mouth now you came up missin thats a good thang heard you was snitchin i' m in the kitchen i' m whippin thangs you changin up thats a damn same
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