Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @baghiosama, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'pick up the pen'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Baghi Osama

3 years ago

thug life Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.