Everything ain't right
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•13 Mar 2022
HOOK ×2 I've been done everythang ain't right, these mutha fuckaz counteract Mandrake, locking down me my brothers we S.A same shit going on downlock world wide. VERS 1 tribal seromony dancing in the moonlight, activists marching protesting black lives. boss Man running at full speed for his life, prisoners like IDGAF it's riot, my brother's brother who gives a fuk about your colour, two Flags ours ya governments. these mutha fuckaz genocides our ancestors. why you think we can't trust coz of our land rights. HOOK2×2 I've been done everythang ain't right, these mutha fuckaz counteract Mandrake, locking down me my brothers we S.A same shit going on downlock
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Hey @shynemlr.6712378, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Everything ain't right ', here are our thoughts 💥 Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Try improving your recording quality if you can. Recording quality distracting from the overall feel of the track fam! Def wanna watch the levels of the mix and even the distance you record from the mic because it all matters. We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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