Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @oaglasromg, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'She sick my d till she couldn’t no more', here are our thoughts 💥 The beat is way too loud compared to your vocals, try fixing the balance for your next track. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Keflon Don Melton

2 years ago

Been broke before but bitch better beware I know I’m fine and the money compliment me Got ‘‘em all shook wondering who sent me He didn’t just do what I think he did did he Oh yea I did it but I ain’t diddy She wanna ride it like a six speed Sucked my dick tell she couldn’t no more Said her jaws hurt and throat too sore I told her drink a lil more she told me she couldn’t Cause when she close her eyes she get dizzy I know I’m here now an you takin me for granted But I promise when I leave you still gonna miss me I got good looks an i articulate Eatin like get a dinner plate I do it for all the bitter hate That I get from all of my fans You never wanted to see me make it now you can Face it all of the hatred really just payed off right in my favor Now look at you haters All over there waitin For me to fall so I just ball like the lakers Fuck wit a real one like me And stop settling for them fakers Let a bad boy like me be good to a girl like you