(P)laying

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12 Mar 2022

foot on the gas aint looking back im toe down I'm more than a king coming to devour that crown got weight of a big city more than a town i knock the snakes and grass blades down got this 40 on me that's all I need got no love in me because nobody loves me they call me hateful and cold when i be speaking my mind but when I was doing the time not many gave me they time best believe its personal i coming for everything i meant to get in my way you get ran through like a hoe and her friends do or more like a slip-n-slide you to cool get blued if you play both sides angst on the beat im venting a freestyle more jewls than a fool call me a rich man

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3 years ago

Hey @standalonebenfrank, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on '(P)laying'! 💥 Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

foot on the gas aint looking back im toe down I'm more than a king coming to devour that crown got weight of a big city more than a town i knock the snakes and grass blades down got this 40 on me that's all I need got no love in me because nobody loves me they call me hateful and cold when i be speaking my mind but when I was doing the time not many gave me they time best believe its personal i coming for everything i meant to get in my way you get ran through like a hoe and her friends do or more like a slip-n-slide you to cool get blued if you play both sides angst on the beat im venting a freestyle more jewls than a fool call me a rich man

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