Bravosavage

3 years ago

hello

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @joseramirez.6936154, Here's some feedback on your track 'shine', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good choice of beat! 🎼 Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bravosavage

3 years ago

ok see im grinding everyday day just to get paid high and fucking laid ur pussy is always on my mind like sum fine grapes imma bust your grape haterz stay away i got this girl and shes all mine she calling me honey while i fuck her from the back now we all sweaty hot and horny i got to put out her fire she hot like a demon but fine ass fuck like an angel my ying and my yang shes always on my mind like i just popped a zan im gone now took flight survival of the fittest my niggas call me simba yes bitch like lion king the world is my jungle and im the king of the jungle i swear no one is on my level sliceing and dicing this flow automatics guns pointed at your fucking nose one false move end up dead and gone outta sight pay them haterz no mind its my time to shine