TRIP (17:44)
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•11 Mar 2022
I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene
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Hi @nyashamhlangawrld! Welcome to our feedback of 'TRIP (17:44)'! 💥 Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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