Khilona (Toy)
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•08 Mar 2022
im a hype type im a mad type im a hype type height fight Neva coming Down again im mad type someone Pull me down again im a risk flight My world is gone yeah yeah thats right alright, lets do this again im writing these words So i can rhyme again how i rhyme these words I dont know though so hoe lo low main chala urdu rap likhny pindi boy joy toy jese khilona ban k reh gaya samjh na aye mjhy baat karna paray rehnay ka hy shouq mjhy.
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Thanks i appreciate the feedback .... its the first time i ever did rap.... so i really wanted positive critisicm on this ... n thank you for this rap fam
Yo @syedraees, It's time for us to take a look at ' Khilona (Toy)'! 💥 Turn your vocals way up, so we can hear your bars over the beat. Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. 👍 Voice way too low fam. we really can only hear the flow and a few things you sayin here and there! Keep practicing and you'll get it down. Work on them levels! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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