Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @josiahjordan.6935558, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Life is Hard (15:58)'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Josiah Jordan

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.