Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @zakiyajones, Here's some feedback on your track 'I'm getting paid', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Try playin' around with different words to create the perfect rhyme scheme. Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Zakiya Jones

3 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait