Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Wassup @joshwillger, Thank you for sharing 'Around the World' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

QuantumMaster

2 years ago

Fuck my ass in the ass of the world with a structure so tall you begin to feel small until the end of days the days of the mind in the minds eye with a lie to belie such a defined sense of life anger defined with a tinge of despair to believe in a world that might not be fair as long as i know what i do to prepare for the end of the world as long as its here i guess im clear to deny you all a taste of a life you believed in the end i guess its up to me but as long as im free ill be between me and the means to which i bleed for the one that relieves me of me futuere behold manifest the gold manifest light behind the closed door open wide its me again