PAIN

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Cry you made this track bruther u betrayed me dawg u left me for dead with mans op u hold on to me like chains that gains my full control full force full pain i break these shakles for the pain to hackle into my skin why bro u were my halo now ur just a dirty liar wanting sins like sharks fins with depression being the wave Dark Knight Glows Dark Souls grow for vengeance im one of those souls that want u like a ghost but more ghastly what i mean man is dont steal my gang dont steal the set my friends Pain is what u gave me which is u shall receive What did u try to achieve in my liege see the siege

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TobyRuins

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @painmaker, Here's some feedback on your track 'PAIN', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jay Villin

16 days ago

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