Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @lisaastley, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'pik up the pen '! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lisa Astley

2 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.