Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @allenhall, Here's some feedback on your track 'james', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Allen Hall

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.