Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @the.real.brian.bates, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Brian bates', here are our thoughts 💥 This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Brian D'Angelo

2 years ago

Freestyle lmao 😂 only when I smoke I can focus and spit without writing 🤦🏼‍♂️