Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @q3fvtsn5uf, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Bitch'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dwayne Young

3 years ago

Aye nigga I don’t know about you but I was born to shoot I should be in the NBA for how good I shoot I get hoes like snoop nigga got set up by a girl nigga oop bro got pressed by the opps he got robbed for his shoes he talk all that when the oops in his face he forget how to shoot I’m tryna tech him what to do but he said he to Focus on school like bro you risking yo life caught nigga fucking with the ops you never know now he could be with the cops Nigga what you Tryna do I’ll make your whole world blue and you know the crew want some too fuck so good made shawty squirt Nigga I’ll treat you like a dork I hate when niggas call me sport yeah I know yo girl don’t eat Bork yo dad talk shit imma stop him wit a fork bitchs on me they say they bored bored bored nigga I’m on the top I will never drop nigga you gon get yo ass pop fuckin wit the opps ion need no body on my back I can stand up on my two feet shout out to Greek freak on Christmas I always took a peek yeah I left my old town in class I was always the clown nigga so deep he drown Alr I’m out this bitch but one more thing fuck 12 bitchs ain’t gon do shit