Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @loganhopkins, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'professional back breaker'! 💥 We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Logan Hopkins

3 years ago

professional back breaker hit it and quit it yea i never date her thats the fuckin spirit fuck bitches get paper thats my motto hope you hear it all these friends turn to haters thats standard your gears slip my patience narrow it tapers jewlery so icy watch it drip dress to impress all these fakers perfect play written in a script they gassed you up i made you vapors like a lollipop ive got you licked dont forget about the neighbors wont ever be easily tricked wanna ball like im on the lakers heres for all those jits stick to a single lane dont move to quick always stay the same dont you ever switch wanna play my game its life get a grip see its time to get back in motion i watch yall sink while im out here floatin like my chain lets link i dont wanna be gloatin or boastin im kiddin i wink preheated oven so imma be roastin not what you think its magic so throw in this potion like shit it stinks its my show im hostin youll miss it if you blink i think i should be exposin all yall need a drink my fire inside has been awoken stop acting like a dink i might become ferocious i hope you notice what broke open with words ive spoke in stacks of bars i be promotin no need for me to be hopin if you opposin like casper imma be ghostin