attempt 1

37 Plays

03 Mar 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Hi @cherylrollins! Welcome to our feedback of 'attempt 1'! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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