from the hood
Dazani Edward61 Plays
•02 Mar 2022
my name is dazani I'm from the hood play with me imma knock you off ya foot you dont want no smoke cuz you know it ain't good. go to school have a good day good grades i get a good pay out of school i get a play date im just basic and yall know that go to a soccer game and win a good hat imma make the news be the first girl to buy the newest pair of shoes i like swag im just saying i aint playing
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Hey @dazaniedward, We're gonna review your track 'from the hood '. Let's get it! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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