Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @thewelshdragon, Thank you for sharing 'suicidal thoughts remix' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. 👍 Seriously fire delivery, that's dope!! 🎆 To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

MC dragon

3 years ago

Why do I even try? Why do I even write lyrics about how I'm living the life When I'm battling pain and my demons at night? Trying to find a new outlet The devil pouncin', I hear him howlin', my vision cloudin' Man, I tried to escape but there ain't no way Try to be strong when I deal with the pain, yeah But I'm ditching the coffin, so my family has options Gotta work 'til I'm dead so that they get the best Don't wanna set up a bad example 'Cause the kids looking up can't leave in shambles Can't make them think clocking out's okay So fuck suicide, I'm here to stay