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3 years ago

thanks so much getting feed back helps because I understand what I need to work on

3 years ago

What's up @jerryking.6910287, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'demons'! 💥 You a freestylin' master, great work off the dome! You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. Great video quality here, defo keep using whatever you're using. 🎥 That background doesn't look too good, you should try another. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

hurting inside

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