Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @augustpine, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'don't deserve you'! 💥 Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dark smoke

3 years ago

,🔥🔥🔥flo