Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @joannecolonnamarchionne! Thanks for sharing 'Life is Hard (15:26)' with us! 💥 The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Timing is important to make your tracks feel more polished, try to get your bars perfectly on beat for the next one. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Joanne Colonna Marchionne

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.